Part 1 滿分作文攻略

　　Section 3英語(yǔ)高考作文高分策略

　　Part 1 滿分作文攻略

　　Section 3英語(yǔ)高考作文高分策略

　　《高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)評(píng)分細(xì)則》解讀

　　以《2013年高考英語(yǔ)新課標(biāo)考試說(shuō)明》為例，請(qǐng)看高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)評(píng)分細(xì)則：

　　一、各檔次的給分范圍和要求

　�。ㄒ唬┑谖鍣n (很好)：(21～25分)

　　1.完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。

　　……

　　二、本題總分為25分，按五個(gè)檔次給分。

　　三、評(píng)分時(shí)，先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來(lái)衡量，確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。

　　四、詞數(shù)少于 80和多于 120的，從總分中減去2分。

　　五、評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、應(yīng)用詞匯和語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性、上下文的連貫性。

　　六、拼寫(xiě)與標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確性的一個(gè)方面，評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)視其對(duì)交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫(xiě)及詞匯用法均可接受。

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　　【鞏固訓(xùn)練】

　　請(qǐng)綜合運(yùn)用上述復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)把下列句子“合寫(xiě)”成語(yǔ)法正確、意義完整、結(jié)構(gòu)復(fù)雜的句子：

　　1.It?s a flat of 25 square metres.There is a bedroom in theflat.There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too.In the bedroom,there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.

　　→It?s a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroomand a kitchen and in the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk anda chair.

　　2.I?m Li Hua.I?m chairman of the student union of Yucai MiddleSchool and our school is close to your university.

　　→I?m Li Hua, chairman of student union of Yucai Middle School,which is close to your university.

　　3.We had a short rest.Then we began to play happily.We sangand danced.Some told jokes.Some played chess.

　　→After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing,telling jokes and playing chess.

　　4.Shakespeare is a son and he is from a poor family.He hadlittle education.He wrote many plays and poems.People all over theworld like his plays and poems.

　　→Shakespeare, a son from a poor family, a man of littleeducation, wrote plays and poems that are read all over theworld. 

　　5.In Picture 1, a man simply puts up a banner.The banner reads“HAPPY EARTH DAY”.Many stumps surround him.In Picture 2, a coupleis happily planting a young tree.

　　→In Picture 1, a man simply puts up a banner reading “HAPPYEARTH DAY” with many stumps surrounding him while in Picture 2, acouple is happily planting a young tree.

　　書(shū)面表達(dá)高分策略之三：有效連接

　　依據(jù)高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)評(píng)分細(xì)則，是否“有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分,使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊”是衡量一篇書(shū)面表達(dá)的重要標(biāo)準(zhǔn)之一。語(yǔ)句間的連接成分包括過(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ)、過(guò)渡句等。過(guò)渡詞猶如“橋梁”和“黏合劑”，在敘述和論述過(guò)程中，恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂眠^(guò)渡詞可避免結(jié)構(gòu)松散，層次不明，表意不清等弊端，使文章條理清楚，文字連貫流暢。使用語(yǔ)句間的連接成分可使語(yǔ)言的連貫性得以實(shí)現(xiàn)，從而使文章過(guò)渡自然、結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)、富于邏輯、更具說(shuō)服力。

　　請(qǐng)欣賞、揣摩高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)范文中如何使用過(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ)，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)更緊湊：

　　1.遞進(jìn)型

　　標(biāo)志詞：besides，what?s more，let alone，worse still, moreover, even,furthermore…

　　Besides, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere inclass.(2012?湖北)

　　What?s worse, they spat and even threw rubbish into thelake.(2012?福建)

　　What?s more, we should analyze the reasons of failure to getsuccess for the next time.(2013?湖南)

　　Furthermore, punishment is by no means a wise choice to helpthem grow up mentally and physically.(2011?陜西)

　　2.解釋型

　　標(biāo)志詞：that is (to say)，in other words… 

　　In other words, we are the master of our own future.(2012?浙江)

　　3.轉(zhuǎn)折型

　　標(biāo)志詞：however，but，yet，although，otherwise, instead, on thecontrary…

　　A perfect result is pleasing, but enjoying the process is alsoattractive.(2013?湖南)

　　However, it is not so easy for people to realize their dreamsevery time.(2013?北京)

　　But I have some difficulties with note?taking and I have noidea of how to use the library.(2011?全國(guó))

　　4.列舉型

　　標(biāo)志詞：firstly…secondly…finally，on the one hand , on the otherhand…

　　First and foremost, I would do a part time job so that I cangain some work experience as well as some pocket money! (2013?山東)

　　On the one hand, we think that friendship comes first, andmatch comes second.On the other hand, since we all tried our best,we had no regret.(2013?湖南)

　　For one thing, they help to improve my writing skills andbroaden my horizon.For another, they can enrich my life and provideme with great fun.(2012?安徽)

　　5.舉例型

　　標(biāo)志詞：for example, for instance, such as, that is, like,take…for example…

　　In our school, there are various kinds of activities, forexample, arts and sports.(2011?四川) 

　　We have a wider range of choices such as travelling andvisiting our relatives or friends.(2013?遼寧)

　　I intend to organize some activities such as English debatecompetitions and speech contests.(2013?天津)

　　6.因果型

　　標(biāo)志詞：Because (of)，since，therefore，as a result，thanksto，thus，due to… 

　　Therefore, I suggest the exhibition be held in the museum.(2013?上海)

　　As a result, I had no choice but to completely focus on mystudy.(2013?山東)

　　As a consequence, children become so reliant on their parentsthat they have no independent thought or creativeideas.(2013?福建)

　　7.讓步型

　　標(biāo)志詞：as,though，although，in spite of, despite…

　　Tired as I was, I never felt so happy.(2013?陜西)

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